April 9, 2009

I revised the script again.  Basically, I rewrote the flashbacks that happen late in the movie, when Shooter is bleeding to death.  They never really worked, especially the one where Angel and Archie are sitting in Shooter’s back seat.  It was supposed to show Shooter going crazy, but no one ever got it.

So, I combined that with Angel bleeding to death, which plays much better, I think.  I changed the location of the gambling scene, because Curt told me about a more appropriate place that was available.

Lastly, I wrote a whole new scene where Archie introduces Shooter to Angel.  I like it, I think, because it shows a different aspect of Angel and Shooter’s relationship.

I’ll upload it later today, so you can read it yourself.


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